Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries, political leaders make most of their effort in pursuing economic development, since

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, in their eyes, is the most significant symbol of national power. Some citizens who are against

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practice argue that advances in other fields

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deserve attention from

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. In my opinion, economic strength alone is not enough to make a

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great. Admittedly, economic growth lays a good foundation for the stability and

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prosperity of a

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. Our survival relies on a good economic situation. Once economic development stopped or reversed, like during a financial crisis,

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would lose their jobs and have little

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for food, clothing and housing, as enterprises would narrow their businesses or even go bankrupt. When

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found it hard to earn a living, they would commit crimes or protest

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the government, resulting in social and political instability. For another,

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need sufficient

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to invest in other fields, like medical care, education and technology. Without steady economic progress, there would be nothing constructive that a government can do.

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boom does not necessarily

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to the prosperity of a

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or the well-being of its citizens. The

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itself doesn’t make sense. What matters is where the

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goes. In some countries, where wealth is confined to

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class or interest groups,

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economic progress only benefits a tiny proportion of

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widens the gap between the rich and the poor. In some others,

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ultimately spend almost all the

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for military purposes,

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as training soldiers, developing weapons including nuclear ones, and even launching wars. For these countries, economic growth is rather a curse than a

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. From my perspective, advances in other aspects like culture and politics are

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worth the effort of the

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material satisfaction,

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urge a better spiritual life, which requires the government to offer more cultural projects.

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, more libraries, museums and scenic spots should be built to enrich

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and improve the overall quality of the citizens.

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more rights and freedom by expanding the scope of democracy can enhance

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’s enthusiasm

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political participation and

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make

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more patriotic. In conclusion, Progress in other domains

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as important as that in

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are supposed to pursue an overall and balanced development.