Write about the following topic: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
There is an ongoing debate regarding,
international
tournament which is held by any Add an article
an international
the international
country
. Few masses believe that organisation of an
international Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
sports
is good for the nation. However
, others claim that,
international Remove the comma
apply
sports
event is bad
idea for the Change the article
a bad
country
. This
essay will discuss both views as far as I am concerned, I am in favour of latter
notion.
To commence with, to make hosting Correct article usage
the latter
of
big tournaments for any Change preposition
apply
country
is the
good. To explain it, international Change the article
apply
sports
events attract huge
number of visitors and Change the article
a huge
the huge
sports
fan
. Fix the agreement mistake
fans
Moreover
, these events attract investment and create jobs. For instance
, Recently, India has
organised Unnecessary verb
apply
cricket
world cup Correct article usage
the cricket
at
Change preposition
apply
last
year and huge
number of Change the article
a huge
the huge
sports
fans are
visited. Because of the outside visitor’s hotels Unnecessary verb
apply
business
as well as media
Correct article usage
the media
business
has significantly high their
revenue. Correct pronoun usage
apply
As a result
, it is proved that big tournaments are helped any country
for
Change preposition
to
increase
Change the verb form
increasing
their
wealth as well as jobs.
Correct pronoun usage
its
On the other hand
, individuals who believe that sports
had become a business
. Also
, thought that some athletes take drugs in order to win at any cost. In addition
, they believe professional sports
encourages
people to Correct subject-verb agreement
encourage
complete
for money. Correct your spelling
compete
For example
, recently, many online application developers are developed
Change the verb form
have developed
Add an article
an application
application
for users to earn money Fix the agreement mistake
applications
Correct your spelling
from
form
Correct your spelling
from
this
big games. As result, due Correct determiner usage
these
this
many people think all the games are fixed and players are playing for money only.
In conclusion, Change preposition
to this
although
organisation
of international Add an article
the organisation
sports
by any country
this
will help to increase Correct pronoun usage
apply
wealth
of Add an article
the wealth
country
as well as create Correct article usage
the country
business
opportunities. Yet due to online applications
some people believe that it is not good for the Add a comma
,applications
country
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