You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution

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Dear Mr Brown, I am writing

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letter to make a complaint about a person who has been shifted recently right

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to my door. Basically, what is happening, he has been producing too much noise in the evenings ,especially at midnight. The reason for these irritating voices is that he is a musician as well as a composer and practices these compositions late at night which is not the right time to do that.

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condition is not acceptable to us. In relation to

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situation, I requested him to minimise the volume or change his time of practice,

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, he was reluctant to my request which is disrespectful to me.

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, My family and I are unable to get proper sleep which affects our physical and mental health. Children need to go to school and we are working in the daytime,

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, we need complete rest at night which is not possible due to these unpleasant sounds coming from his house.

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, I humbly request you to either warn him about his inappropriate behaviour in the community or make him understand the rules of our society

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I have to complain to higher authorities. Hope you will take appropriate action immediately. Yours sincerely, Ammy Sandhu

immysandhu94Thu Oct 27 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

210 words

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?