Some people believe that the problem of illegal drugs can be solved by just legalizing all drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
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a large
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young
population is addicted to drugs, Correct article usage
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it
through the borders. Correct pronoun usage
them
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, in many parts of the Linking Words
world
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prescription
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, without taking it in specified quantity it can lead to death. Linking Words
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, can bring many other consequences which will put Linking Words
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expense
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, it will be very difficult to control Linking Words
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the
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policymakers
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policymakers
quota
system; only allowing the specified quantity according to the need of pharmaceutical companies. Correct article usage
the quota
Otherwise
, by legalizing it will be impossible to keep the check. In a recent survey done in Australia, it was found that 80 Linking Words
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the youth
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of other ages are involved.
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most harm
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