Some people believe that the problem of illegal drugs can be solved by just legalizing all drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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legal. In
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with, in recent days
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population is addicted to drugs,
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, even they don't hesitate to smuggle
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through the borders.
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, in many parts of the
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some types of medicine like sleeping pills, anti-depressants and antibiotics can’t sell without
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because
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dosage is crucial.
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, without taking it in specified quantity it can lead to death.
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, can bring many other consequences which will put
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pressure on the health care system of any country and unwanted
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as well.
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, it will be very difficult to control
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crimes and drug addiction in
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society which in turn will spoil the youth of any nation.
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, some drugs have
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use,
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, Marijuana or Ephedrine as FDA
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their usefulness in heart diseases, epilepsy or improved concentration but it is the obligation of
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policy makers
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to regulate
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system; only allowing the specified quantity according to the need of pharmaceutical companies.
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, by legalizing it will be impossible to keep the check. In a recent survey done in Australia, it was found that 80
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drugs are taken by
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of age 15-28 while only 20
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of other ages are involved. In conclusion, I would say legalizing
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illicit products will only cause
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to
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society and youth the most.
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