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SOME PEOPLE THINK THE GOVERNMENTS SHOULD SPEND AS MUCH MONEY AS POSSIBLE EXPLORING OUTER SPACE. OTHERS THINK GOVERNMENT SHOULD SPEND THIS MONEY ON OUR BASIC NEEDS ON EARTH. WHICH OF THESE TWO OPINIONS DO YOU AGREE WITH?

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The given table demonstrates amounts of the use of different types of mobile phone functions in percentage between 2006 and 2010. Overall, there are seven features of mobile phones. They related to calls, photos, messages, games, the internet, music and videos. It is clear that make calls in 2006 and 2008 accounted for 100% and in 2010 it slightly decreased to 99%. Every
year
 camera develops, so in 2006 snaping was 66%,
however
, 71% and 76% counted. Sending and receiving emails increased every
year
 too. In 2006, 2008 and 2010 it was 73%, 75% and 79%. It is obvious that games are innovating,
for example
 in the start it was only 17%, in the middle it suddenly climbed to 42, but in the
next
 two years, it reduced only by 1%. In fact, the number of people who have been become using the internet since 2008, so was 41% and in
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2010
year
 sharply soared to 73%. The 2008
year
 started with 12% of playing music,
on the other hand
, the percentage increased to 18% and 26%. Eventually, record videos started only at 9% in 2008, but it was sharply increasing 2 years and accounted for 35%.
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