You attended a meeting last week but you are not happy with the hotel which you stayed in. Write a letter to the organizer who hotel for you. In your letter, you should tell: (a) what the problems were (b) what you didn't like about the hotel (c) what do you want organizer to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John and I attended the meeting you organized in Singapore

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week. I stayed at the

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which you arranged during my time

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there. I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the services which I received from the

hotel

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. First and foremost, the heater was not working during my stay. Even though I informed

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issue to the service desk, I did not receive any appropriate service to repair it.

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, the taste of the food served to me was quite normal. I expected more than

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from

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a renowned international

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. The location of the

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is quite convenient as it is in the central area of the town.

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, the services I received were extremely poor. The staff should be trained properly to serve international guests. Would you kindly arrange another

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or ask the previous

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to improve their services since their location is convenient? I would much prefer to live in a service-oriented

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. As long as it is comfortable, I don't mind any location to live. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, John Luise

aungmon87

Oct 27, 2022

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Ensure to address all points raised in the prompt. Include specifics about the problems and what you didn't like about the hotel to fully respond to the task.

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Maintain coherence and cohesion by organizing ideas and information in a logical order. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and paragraphs effectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

194 words

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