You attended a meeting last week but you are not happy with the hotel which you stayed in. Write a letter to the organizer who hotel for you. In your letter, you should tell: (a) what the problems were (b) what you didn't like about the hotel (c) what do you want organizer to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John and I attended the meeting you organized in Singapore
last
week. I stayed at the
hotel
which you arranged during my time
in
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there. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the services which I received from the
hotel
. First and foremost, the heater was not working during my stay. Even though I informed
this
issue to the service desk, I did not receive any appropriate service to repair it.
Moreover
, the taste of the food served to me was quite normal. I expected more than
this
from
such
a renowned international
hotel
. The location of the
hotel
is quite convenient as it is in the central area of the town.
However
, the services I received were extremely poor. The staff should be trained properly to serve international guests. Would you kindly arrange another
hotel
or ask the previous
hotel
to improve their services since their location is convenient? I would much prefer to live in a service-oriented
hotel
. As long as it is comfortable, I don't mind any location to live. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, John Luise
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Ensure to address all points raised in the prompt. Include specifics about the problems and what you didn't like about the hotel to fully respond to the task.
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