Essay Topic: Some people think that giving money as gift to teenagers is good while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the choice with present selection is overwhelming because various persons have different desires.While one people state that

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is the right option for a bonus , another thing is that pay should be excluded as

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is not a good option.

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essay will explore both views by outlining my opinion that

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funds

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should be presented to

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the youngster

a youngster

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youngster

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youngsters

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as it will supply them with means of buying what they indeed prefer and not to be absent with not preferable benefit.

Firstly

, if youngsters have

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the capital

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for the present it will give them the opportunity to purchase what they prefer.

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, whereas some individuals have modern tastes, others could have

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outdated type of

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so

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will lead that the expectations of youth could not be meet.

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, as a Russian proverb says as ones don't have friends when it comes to taste and colour.

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means that varied people have altered preferences, so it will definitely lead to varied desirable presents.

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, while ones have their own style and set up taste , the possibility that a teenager will be satisfied with the given grant has less chance. So giving payment for a bonus will be the right choice. On other hand, salary could spoil

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attitudes towards the present.

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means that the young generation could spend their budget on inappropriate purposes

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as alcohol, cigarettes and drugs.

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,

instead

of spending their funds on proper means

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as needed demands or education , the society of ages 13-16 are expending their funds on clubs and trash food which is unhealthy for their physical conditions. So, presenting gifts

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a juvenile

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juvenile

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will prevent spending capital in improper ways

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as alcoholic drinks and drugs along with unhealthy food

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as fast food. In conclusion, cash and gifts for a present to teenage people is the best choice.

However

, while some individuals consider that

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funds

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should be given

instead

of getting gifts for

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the youngster

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youngsters

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, others claim that the best way is not presenting

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the bill

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bills

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to them. Both opinions can be correct,

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, in my opinion ,

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the property

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is the best selection for those who want to present something for a special day for youth.

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will give them a chance to buy what they wish.

In addition

, if the check is provided disappointment with the incorrect award will be avoided.