Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is sad but true that in recent days youth is inclined towards social media for chatting with their friends and other mates rather than going out with them in person. There can be a plethora of motives behind
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easy availability of social networking sites. Due to the advancement of technology and awareness of their
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amongst the younger generation, they prefer to
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those facilities from anywhere.
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, google meet for video calling
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, which can save their time effectively and they
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they don't feel left out because they constantly get in touch with their loved once. To add to
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of electronic gadgets which provide a wider view on social sites. If we impose
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teenagers have no other option but to meet people in public. To illustrate
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and students literally got together for that day on which they
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banned their equipment for a rest of the day.
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excitement among the youth and encourage them
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to visit
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places with their groups. To sum up, definitely there has been an over usage of social media nowadays among
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teens,
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restricting the
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help to bring them closer. For
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the government have to become more active.
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