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How frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants beween 2003 and 2013

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The bar chart shows information about the fast food eating habits of the population in the united states from 2003 to 2013. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that most
people
 once a week or once or twice a month eat fast food at
restaurants
 during the given period. Looking into the details, in 2003 around 31% of
people
 eat fast food in
restaurants
 once a week and
this
percentage
 increased to 33% in 2006 while in 2013
this
percentage
 decreased by 5%.
Similarly
, in 2003 30% of
people
 eat once or twice a month in
restaurants
 but there is a decrease of 5% in
this
percentage
 in 2006. while in 2013, there was a sharp increase in
this
 trend and touched its peak at 33%.
In addition
 to that, about 17% of
people
 eat several times a week in 2003 but in 2006
this
percentage
 increased to 20% while
this
percentage
 decreased by 4% in 2013. If we look into a few times a year group
then
 around 13% of
people
 in 2003 eat a few times a year in
restaurants
 but for 2006 and 2013
this
percentage
 was the same at 15%. Less than 5% of
people
 eat every day or never eat in
restaurants
 in 2003, 2006 and 2013.
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