You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you have done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to provide feedback on the cookery

course

I have taken recently. As

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my cooking skills had become more complimented since I would like to take

this

opportunity to express my appreciation for the evolution I have attained from the

course

.

Although

it is a short and basic

course

, it contained useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which were entirely new to me.

Moreover

, they have taught us very simple techniques to avoid errors which I have been making since I was cooking. I particularly enjoyed the kitchen hack module, which enhanced my skill to a new level. I have been cooking on weekends for my family and the difference Is clear. The effect of

course

can be seen in my cooking and the appreciation has been raising expectations as the words spread throughout my relatives. I suggest

dessert-making

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cookery plan should be offered. I would be delighted to take part in it.I really appreciate the results your program has provided me. I look forward to you. Sincerely.

zane

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Zane

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