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As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways . What are the main differences between young children's social behavior and that of adults?

#children #adults #behavior #changes #differences
There are some alterations between
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 and full
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grown
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 in their social
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. When a youngster is officially considered
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a
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mature . I think that there are many differences between them but one of the most important things is responsibility.
Firstly
, adults are much more responsible and serious than children . They know almost all the rules like how to behave in society, at home and as well as
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 public places.
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, now I can act like a gentleman ubiquitous but in my
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although
 I champed, spoke loudly and even fight with
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 it was normal for me .
As a result
 time with time though I learned
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 mistakes I was very ashamed
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 those.
Secondly
, disobedience
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is one of
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 qualities of
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. They quarrel with each other,
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do not say hello to the elders.
Also
, they do not complete the tasks which are given
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 them .
Such
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the children in my state when they meet older people ,
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often do not say the words "Assalomu-aleykum " which is saying hello . Several of them feel ashamed, but some do not care.
Therefore
, every parent should teach their offspring to say that because
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 golden words. In conclusion, I
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belive
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believe
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 that even though there are always differences in social
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 between them they change
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time.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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