Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that

teenagers

should spend their leisure time

to do

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miscellaneous voluntary

work

for their

community

which is beneficial to both

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the

teenagers

and their respective communities. According to my opinion, I strongly

agree

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this

viewpoint as it can assist the youths to be

agile

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and energetic plus to develop various interpersonal skills.

Also

, the local governments can reduce their yearly estimated cost of doing different

community

work

if adolescents extend their helping hands.

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essay will explain the reasons behind my agreement. The most crucial point for supporting

this

idea is that participating in part-time charity projects like gardening or arranging a cycling camp during holidays can boost

up

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the fitness level of

teenagers

so that they can be more active and joyous in their regular activities like studying or involving in a pretty specialized task that require more brainstorming.

In addition

, doing voluntary activities give them a chance to interact with different types of

people

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the

community

which definitely assists them to grow numerous social skills like active listening and emotional intelligence that can have an impact on their future life.

On the other hand

,

local

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community

can

also

be benefitted from

such

unpaid

work

. During

this

era of economic depression, when most

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people

are trying to save their income for upcoming hunger and recession, they usually pay

least

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attention to less important

staffs

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like donating food and clothes to the poor. Local

teenagers

can extend their helping hands in

this

aspect. They can collect dry food and their own plus their parent’s unused clothes in a proper manner. After that, they can provide those to the needy

people

living in slums and

suburb

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areas. In

this

way, they can help to save a lot of money these

people

could spend

for

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their food and clothing. To recapitulate, I absolutely believe that

teenagers

should take part in voluntary

community

work

in their idle time for themselves plus society’s betterment.