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the plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

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Overall, some facilities in Grange
park
 have been updated, but the location of entrances remains the same place. The
park
 has been changed into a more inclusive space where everyone from children to older people can enjoy the
park
, and it now holds more audience to watch concerts.
To begin
 with, in 1920, the stage for musicians has been replaced by an amphitheatre for concerts, located to the west of the garden.
Besides
 that, the fountain located in the middle of the
park
 has been removed by a rose garden surrounded
with
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 seats. At the northeastern corner of the
park
, a pond for water plants and a rose garden have been rebuilt with a children's play area and cafe.
In addition
, there was a glasshouse at the northeastern corner,
next
 to the Eldon street entrance, which has been substituted with a water feature
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