You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. -You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. in your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear John, am writing you
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I read lately
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the newspaper from you and your wife seeking someone to teach your children Arabic for a year.
Although
, you live in Australia and I live in India,
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I think I could tutor both of your children through online zoom.
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, I could give extra classes
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the weekend. Plus, assuring
your
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they will learn the basics of The Arabic language in a short period of time at least they will be able to pronounce the letter
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in English. to be clear I really need
this
job as a
part time
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to pay my college fees
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now Med School
third
year, as you know med school is very complicated and I need to dedicate tons of hours
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studying, so
this
will be suitable for me in saving time. To Sum
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I believe am the best fit
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this
job
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all aspects and I promise you your children will get the best out of it.
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your reply Sincerely Yours,
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