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Some people say that E books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is argued that mobile books
such
 as EPUB & PDF files will contemplate old-school
newspapers
 and
magazines
. I couldn’t agree more with the given statement that online
applications
 are replacing traditional
newspapers
 in a number of ways and
also
magazines
 are
also
magazines
 too moving in the same direction. Online
applications
 are gaining traction regarding environmental concerns thanks to global warming people are making conscious effects to reduce the usage of
paper
 at the same online
applications
 are getting very reliable not to mention, through online
applications
 it is
also
 benefiting companies naturally, online selling means no need for
paper
 which leads to reduction of
paper
 purchase printing and transportation of
paper
 which is a huge money saver.
For instance
; In our ,state we have an application called paperboy which is an alternative to
newspapers
 in that application you can freely subscribe to two
newspapers
. Because the ads themselves can give them back the profit that they are looking for. Likely, the
magazines
 too were pacing in the same direction as the
newspapers
 with added forums to keep the members engaged to the website 24*7. the
magazines
 come with the tweaked version of a newspaper where they are selling the membership online, which is linked to your e-mail I’d so that you never miss an update.
This
 keeps the subscription members and company happy,
for example
, XBHP is an online magazine that started with a small website and invested solely in online purchases in times when enthusiasts are shifting from offline to online mail and found the vision paid off once they got flourished. In conclusion, newspaper and
magazines
 sales are reducing because of the raising awareness of globalisation, which is thriving with the aid of online
applications
 and websites, where regular readers can rely on e-books
instead
 of hardcopies, what is ,more is that we can revisit any previous magazine in a moment.
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