Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Good day! I am writing with reference to your article in the national newspaper for

town

centres in our country. In

this

regard, I agree with some of the points that were stated in the article like similar schools, office buildings, and most importantly basic road infrastructure.

However

, the entire

town

centre is not as same as other

town

centres in Pakistan. I would like to share that the

town

centre of Hyderabad is a more historic place than other centres in Pakistan. The buildings over here are eco-friendly which led to less energy consumption and a natural environment for

town

people. There are

also

special parks and parking spots as per the preference of people in

town

, some families like urban parks, whereas, some people have a preference for rural designed parks. The

town

is designed as per the requirements of its residents.

Further

, I would be happy to give you a tour of our

town

. You are welcome to Hyderabad anytime as per your availability,

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along with senior officials of the

town

committee would love to give a tour and share details of our enriching history. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you to visit our

town

. Yours faithfully, Haseeb

Submitted by haseebfakhund on Fri Oct 28 2022

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9 paragraphs

214 words

8.00

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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