Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Good day! I am writing with reference to your article in the national newspaper for

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centres in our country. In

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regard, I agree with some of the points that were stated in the article like similar schools, office buildings, and most importantly basic road infrastructure.

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, the entire

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centre is not as same as other

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centres in Pakistan. I would like to share that the

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centre of Hyderabad is a more historic place than other centres in Pakistan. The buildings over here are eco-friendly which led to less energy consumption and a natural environment for

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people. There are

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special parks and parking spots as per the preference of people in

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, some families like urban parks, whereas, some people have a preference for rural designed parks. The

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is designed as per the requirements of its residents.

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, I would be happy to give you a tour of our

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. You are welcome to Hyderabad anytime as per your availability,

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along with senior officials of the

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committee would love to give a tour and share details of our enriching history. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you to visit our

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. Yours faithfully, Haseeb

haseebfakhundFri Oct 28 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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9 paragraphs

214 words

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