The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.

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The flowchart depicts the process of production
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colored
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coloured
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plastic paper
clips
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. Overall, it is clear the process that
manufacture
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these
clips
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in
this
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factory undergoes in fourth steps. According
of
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what is shown,
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first
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phase is
divided
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the molten plastic according to
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color
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colour
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into three groups involve blue, green, and
gray
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grey
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color
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colour
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,
then
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a quality control department is assessed the quality and strength of the paper
clips
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and decided either
reject
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or
continuous
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the process. Following
this
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, the paper
clips
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are sorted by hand into two groups one of them
involved
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mixed
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color
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colour
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and
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the other
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other single
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another single color
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color
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. Before the final phase, the quality control department is checked again the single and mixed colors
clips
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. The final step,
it
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apply
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is packaging and dispatch for
delivering
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for
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customers.
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