Many museums charge for admission while others are free. do you think the advantages of charging people to museums outweighs the disadvantages.
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is advantageous is that it helps visitors to place more value on the time spent touring the facility. Use synonyms
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this
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fee
enabled me to concentrate Use synonyms
to
all the details of the events around the assassination during the tour.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite