You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you have done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and recently, I have done an Italian cooking
course
at your institute. I would like to thank all of the team members for
such
a great
course
they organized. All of the chefs were so helpful and they were always ready to help the students in case of any issue or query. I knew that I didn't know basic cooking skills but still I took the courage to opt for
this
course
, and after that, I felt so confident when asking anything from them as they were so humble towards all of us.
Moreover
, I liked the way how they entertain us with jokes and in
this
way they made cooking so interesting. Now, after completing
this
course
, I have started taking online orders and I am so grateful that I am doing better with each passing day. Now, I would like you to organize one more cooking
course
in Indian cuisine, as most of my customers love to have Indian dishes. I hope you'll arrange
this
course
soon and I'll be waiting for your invitation to enrol on that.
Also
, I have recommended your institution to many of my friends. Yours Sincerely, Shikha
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