IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?

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IN SOME COUNTRIES, THERE IS A GROWING NUMBER OF

PEOPLE

FINDING THE HISTORY OF THEIR HOMES. IN MY OPINION, THEY RESEARCH

THIS

FOR THE FOLLOWING BASIS, PERHAPS FOR SAFETY AND SECURITY

REASONS

. IN HELPING TO FIND ANSWERS FOR

THIS

, THEY COULD ASK THE PREVIOUS OWNERS OR THEIR NEIGHBORS AND LOCAL GOVERNMENT. SOME

PEOPLE

DELVE IN THE STORIES OF THEIR PROPERTY BECAUSE OF SAFETY

REASONS

THIS

DUE TO

AGEING AND DECOMPOSITION OF THE STRUCTURE FROM WEATHER CONDITIONS LIKE THYPOONS AND EARTHQUAKE. THEY ARE EAGER TO KNOW THE HARMFUL IMPACTS. IN THAT WAY THEY COULD EASILY PLAN FOR THE RENOVATION, LIKE THE COST AND CONSULATION FROM ARCHITECTS AND ENGINEERS. THERE ARE

PEOPLE

WHO ARE LOOKING AFTER THE SECURITY OF THEIR HOME. ESPECIALLY IF FAMILIES ARE LIVING THERE BECAUSE PARENTS USUALLY CONSIDER THE WELL-BEING OF THEIR CHILDREN WHEN FINDING A PLACE TO LIVE.

FOR EXAMPLE

, IF THERE ARE CRIMES RECORDED IN THE PLACE OR SOMEONE HAS DIED, TO ANY NATURE OF DEATH, OTHER

REASONS

CAN BE ACCEPTABLE BUT THE ABOVE-MENTIONED CAN BE VERY DIFFICULT. THE BEST WAY TO EXPLORE

THIS

IS TO ASK THE PREVIOUS OWNER SINCE THEY CAN PROVIDE ALL THE NECESSARY INFORMATION.

ALSO

, ASKING NEIGHBORS COULD ADD

FURTHER

DETAILS. WE CAN EASILY DISTINGUISH IF THE LOCATION IS SAFE AND CONVENIENT TO LIVE IN. IN CONCLUSION, SAFETY AND SECURITY ARE THE TWO POSSIBLE

REASONS

WHY

PEOPLE

ARE KEEN TO KNOW THE HISTORY OF THEIR HOMES. TO FIND ANSWERS THEY SHOULD ASK THE FORMER OWNERS OR

PEOPLE

AROUND THE AREA,

APART FROM

THIS

THE LOCAL GOVERNMENT.

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

Historical research
Genealogy
Architectural styles
Heritage
Relics
Oral history
Archival records
Museum exhibits
Historical societies
House tours
Renovation projects
Original blueprints
Careful documentation

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IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?

Fully explain your ideas

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case ? What can be done to attract more local people to these museums ?

Some people believed that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities. Others believe that outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.