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Saudi Arabia has a varity of culuters. Do you agree or disagree ?

Life in
Saudi
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 Arabia
The life
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Life
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 in
Saudi
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 Arabia is very amazing for several reasons as
following
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follows
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. People are friendly,
wealth
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wealthy
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 culture and modern country.
Although
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, the weather is aggressive
but
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apply
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there is plenty of places
can
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that can
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 be visited during the
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summertime
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summer time
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summertime
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. The citizen of
Saudi
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 Arabia is very friendly and outgoing. It is easy
talk
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to talk
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where
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when
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 you are walking in
market
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the market
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 and setting
in
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on
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 the bus with strangers.
Moreover
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,
Saudi
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 has
big
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a big
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 country, so they have
multi cultures
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multi-cultures
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.
Consequence
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, you will find
variety
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a variety
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 of
cloths
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clothes
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 and food dishes and cuisine.
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, there are a lot of places in
Saudi
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 to be visited.
For instance
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, Riyadh city. It is the capital of
Saudi
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 and it has nice views. In conclusion, it is clear that
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Saudi
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Saudis
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 has good quality of life.

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