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Some people believe that their teachers should not give school children homework, others believe that homework plays an essential role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that their teachers should not give
school
children
homework
,
others
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 believe that
homework
 plays an essential role in the education of
children
. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. A fraction of
the
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society believes that
,
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 in
primary
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the primary
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 education system
homework
 should not be given by the teachers. Whereas,
other
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 part of the society believes that the
homework
 is
very
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 important part in
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growth
for
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the
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children
.In my opinion, giving
homework
 in primary
school
 is not an essential
practice
 in
long
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 term. On the one hand,
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in
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 early
age
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 many
children
 take a
lot
 of stress due to
homework
 which their teacher
give
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 them to complete after
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school
time
over
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.
For instance
, as per the researchers
of
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the
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Bostan
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Boston
 University, a large number of
children
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from
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five to ten are taking a
lot
 of stress when
school
 gives a
lot
 of
homework
 to them.
Moreover
,
children
 who
takes
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 less stress are more likely to perform
successful
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 in their future life and
also
 in their professional life.
On the other hand
, a large number of society thinks that the best possible
practice
 for
school
children
 is to provide all education
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within
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with in
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 the
school
 premises and don’t give
homework
 to them.
As a result
 ,
student
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students
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 have a
lot
 of
time
 in
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their spare
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 to do something which they like and
also
 they have enough
time
 to play physical sports and become physically fit.
Furthermore
,
children
 join some other language
class
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classes
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 as an extra language
class
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classes
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 in the afternoon because they are free after
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school
time
. In conclusion, an extreme
practice
 of many schools is that they are giving a
lot
 of
homework
 which is not a humble
practice
 for the
children
 who are still growing and because of
this
 they are unable to focus on other think and later on, not performing up to the mark in their future life.
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