Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
With the advent of technological advancements, the education sector has been changing drastically in the
last
few decades. Nowadays, some individuals believe that academic ability must be the only factor when giving admission to students
. Whereas, others
, including me, are on par with the fact
that it is salutary for schools
to have students
with different skill sets. In this
essay, we are going to look at both sides of a coin.
On one hand, there are many who side with the concept that schools
should select students
solely based on their academic knowledge. To begin
with, it is a famous fact
that students
with good academics
will create a positive environment
in the class, which can be helpful to others
as well. If in a class all the students
with equal academic qualities, then
definitely, the classroom’s environment
will be competitive. A sense of competitiveness will inculcate in them. As a result
, they will work harder to prove themselves and try to be distinct from others
. This
will lead to a profound foundation of academics
. To give an illustration, in India there are some Elite universities like IITs and NITs that choose students
based on their academic achievements. Not only their academic results are better than other universities but also
their placement rate is 100%. Hence
, selecting students
based on their academics
is beneficial for students
as well as schools
and universities.
Paradoxically, on the other hand
, a veritable cornucopia of people, including me, is on par with the fact
that it would be advantageous to include children with different abilities. This
could be explained by the fact
that students
’ different skill sets will create a diversified environment
inside a class, they can teach each other their unique skills. Consequently
, social skills will develop inside them. Additionally
, student versatility will increase, which can be beneficial for them in academics
as well as other aspects like sports. For instance
, research conducted by a YALE university on the different types of schools
found some flabbergasting results schools
, which included students
with different skills, ranked better in terms of sports as well as academics
. Thus
, it is paramount for not only schools
but also
for students
to study in diverse cultures.
In a nutshell, some detractors might argue that the selection criteria of students
in school are based completely based on academic abilities. However
, on the far end, I'm on the side that a diversified environment
is more salutary for students
, in order to stay ahead of the curve as compared to others
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