Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays
people
tend to take risks in their lifestyle, where people
live only a short lifespan. Humans in the world, in the present day, do many paramount activities which are breathtaking, changing from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. In my opinion, I think this
is a good chance for people
's lives under
two considerable reasons, Change preposition
for
such
as people
get more life experiences in nature
and for their physical fitness. In this
essay, I will outline my opinion and provide reasons with valid examples.
On the one hand, human begins are under the pressure of globalisation, which leads them to get more trendy experiences from nature
. Since the younger generation is working towards the urban development of the world they are living in large cities full of pollution and high-rise rising buildings. Whenever ever they find enough spare time youngsters are trying to enjoy their lives by climbing mountains which is hiking from
the technical term. Change preposition
in
In contrast
, this
gives them the opportunity to learn more about the outside world of cities, and get more experience in mother nature
. They develop their knowledge about the surroundings, such
as the animals, birds and different flora and fauna. As an example, one of my friends wanted to do the activity of flying which is a human-made activity, but after a few findings on the internet and saw
pictures of how Wrong verb form
seeing
people
enjoy hiking she decided to go on a trip to Mount Everest to climb.
On the other hand
, people
, or the young generation have the sense that the activity of flying apparatus is outdated and this
is not providing them enough
physical fitness to burn their calories. Due to these reasons, some groups of young, as well as old Add the preposition
with enough
people
, climb mountains to develop their well-being, most people
such
as athletes and humans who are having various diseases such
as obesity, adore to do hiking.
To sum up, in my opinion, this
trend is not a bad idea for people
to get escaped from their busy lifestyles to enjoy nature
as well as develop their fitness rather than going to artificial equipment-based buildings. In fact, every sport has its own risk, so people
need to accept and beware of these risky issues and attend these activitiesSubmitted by wathsala.lekamge1997 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite