You had borrowed a book from the public library however, when You reached home, you found that some important pages were torn away. Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation. You should - Mention the book - Mention the pages - Suggest what can be done.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your attention the

book

which I borrowed from the public

library

this

morning. I would

also

like to make some suggestions so that

such

a thing will not happen again. As I am keen on reading books regularly and I have been a regular member of your

library

ever since I moved to

this

area 2 years ago.

However

, early today I borrowed the "Life of pie"

book

from the

library

, but just now I found out that some

pages

of the

book

are missing. Though I can understand

this

situation is not common while surfing along the

pages

, I came to know that some important story sheets are missing, namely,

pages

number 67,88 and 100. I only noticed these

pages

, but there might be a possibility that some more

pages

would have been missed from

this

book

. Even though

library

staff can't go through each and every

book

to check

this

condition, I would like to suggest you review every

book

's prior submission to the

library

, so that we can identify if any

pages

are missing from the books. I hope you will consider into Account in order to avoid

further

mishaps. Yours faithfully, Santhosh.

Submitted by santhoshvarunkumar on Sat Oct 29 2022

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