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Team/group activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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Doing any type of activity in a
team
 or a
group
 can be beneficial in
life
. The
activities
 done in groups can teach individuals more important
skills
 in
life
 than
activities
done
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 alone.
This
 essay agrees with the statement. The following essay will discuss
first
 what
skills
 can be learned in
group
activities
 and
secondly
, will discuss what are the disadvantages of doing
activities
 alone.
Group
activities
 can teach the most important
skills
 needed in
life
. There are various
skills
 that can teach an individual in
group
activities
.
one
 of the
skills
 an individual can learn is the
team
 working which is needed in all areas of our
life
.
Secondly
,
people
 can learn the leadership qualities that are needed especially in the business world or a person who wants to be a leader in the political world.
For example
: In sports like football,
this
 game is played always in a
team
,
one
 of the famous football players is Cristiano Ronaldo who is
also
 known to be
one
 of the great leaders a
team
 can have as per
this
 statement it is true, a
group
 activity can teach a person to be a good leader. Doing
activities
 alone is a disadvantage for an individual because it can be lonely at times and sometimes it would be not beneficial for
people
 due to individuals wouldn't learn new things. The other reasons are like
people
 wouldn't be able to work in corporate jobs because it involves working with various kinds of
people
 together. In conclusion, the best way to do an activity is in a
group
 or a
team
 because
one
 can learn various
skills
 working in a
team
also
, not only do individuals learn
skills
 but new things and lessons can be learned too in a
group
.
Therefore
, doing
activities
 in a
group
 is more beneficial than doing them alone.
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