You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say • which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter in regard to an article about the differences in town centres of my home country which was published by your establishment a week ago.
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I agree with some statements of the article, some changes should be considered to make it realistic.
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, the writer mentioned that most cities have significant mountains and restaurants which serve Iranian dishes are the fixed parts of centres which
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entirely true. Other than those similarities, numerous unique monuments and attributes exist in different areas.
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, my home town Tehran is a lively or even bustling city where shops and malls are open 24 hours per day and
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being stuck in traffic jams for long hours is usual for citizens.
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, residents of northern cities are enjoying the pleasant atmosphere of their cities and cycling
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of driving has become their neighbour less polluted and less crowded. I strongly offer your author a free city exploration in order to demonstrate the diversity and differences of my state from other regions. Yours faithfully, Mohammad
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