Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now a days. The governments have taken some steps at global level but they got only few solution. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved.

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environmental
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issues
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pollution
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environmental
problems and
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. There are many problems in the environment.
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people
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electecity
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electricity
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from using cars.
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electricity
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is a lot of trash will become from
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consuming. They through a lot of
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like
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, wood,minerals, and plastic.
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the environment and they can do
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causes
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issues
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the environmental
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issues
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people
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water
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public
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some where
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recycling trash to reduce
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environmental
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issues
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environmental
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issues
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cars and change
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electricity
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sun
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energy or
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energy.
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they can urge
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to do recycling
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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