Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now a days. The governments have taken some steps at global level but they got only few solution. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved.

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time. In
this
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essay will
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explain
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explain

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explane
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of
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environmental
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environmental

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enfironmental
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environmental
problems and
solutions
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. There are many problems in the environment.
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problem
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issues
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issue

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is
the
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that

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people
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consuming now of stuff is more than before. Many
of
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they using things more than amounts they need
it
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,
also
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, they don't care about
save
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saving

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electecity
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electricity

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,
save
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saving

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water or
reduce
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reducing

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from using cars.
In contrast
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electecity
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electricity

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spend
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spending

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water
,
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apply

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and using
car
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the car

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a lot.
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Second
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The second

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problem of
the problems environment
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the environment of the problem
the problem's environment

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is a lot of trash will become from
people
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consuming. They through a lot of
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rubbish
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rubbish

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papers
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, wood,minerals, and plastic.
This
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stuff is very
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language
dangers

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of
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the environment and they can do
a pig effects
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pig effects
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. Those were the
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causes
cases
cause
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causes
cases
cause

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causes
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issues

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issues
. There are two
solutions
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the environmental
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issues

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issues
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,
the
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apply

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people
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should

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reduce of using things in
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, turn off the light if they don't sit in the rooms, reduce
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water
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and
use
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transitions if they want to go
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some where
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use
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recycling trash to reduce
of
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, recycle paper, plastic and wood. Those were the
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of
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environmental
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issues
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issues

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. All in all,
they
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the

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exmained
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of
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issues
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issues

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issuses
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issues
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my opinion, I think the
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make
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decreasing
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using
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use

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cars and change
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use
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electecity
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electricity

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of
use
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sun
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energy or
wined
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wind

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energy.
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they can urge
people
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to do recycling
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for
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for

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fot
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there
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their

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rupesh
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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