Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

Dear Sir, I read an interesting article in Monday's national newspaper elaborating on the similarities between town centres in our country.
However
, I am not in complete accordance with you and
therefore
am writing
this
letter to discuss it. I cannot agree less with some of the pointers mentioned in the article. You have mentioned some of the most fascinating facts about how beautifully every town centre depicts the culture followed by the majority of people in town.
Secondly
, the nightlife is another undeniable aspect which makes the city lively.
Also
the variety of shopping options each downtown offers. My city is different in terms of diversity as well as location
therefore
it does not share all the similarities with other downtown areas. There is a garden as well as a riverside flowing
next
to it
therefore
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, almost all the age groups of people can be seen hanging around it.
Moreover
, recently the renovations have given it quite a modern outlook in terms of making wheelchair-friendly shops. Above mentioned few differences make our downtown quite unique and I would love to show you around if you visit. I hope I did not overstep by sharing my opinion in
this
letter. Let me know your viewpoint. Thank you. Best Regards, Cary Rogers
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