There are many inventions in human history, but some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, almost every country these days spending millions of dollars on research and development.
Although
there are countless inventions which have completely changed the way of living
but
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of the
Internet
is considered supreme by some folks. I believe that the
Internet
definitely was the biggest change in the era. The
Internet
becomes so important in day-to-day life that life literally would shut down without the
internet
.From a normal
individual
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to a big giant
company
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, everybody needs the
internet
these days.
For instance
, businesses use the
internet
to do online transactions, store or retrieve their data and a normal human being needs to book his ticket online or send an important email.The effect of
this
can
also
be seen when due to a technical problem sometimes the
internet
shuts down and it creates chaos even if it is just for a few minutes.
Also
, the
Internet
made learning so easy that everything is just at the fingertip. Many educational institutions use the
internet
to deliver their content either fully or partially.
For example
, Some Universities/Colleges provide distance education programs and
also
professors post their study material online and make announcements. Students
also
have unlimited access to anything they want to learn in
further
depth. Technology made human lives luxurious but without the
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internet
it is almost impossible to run lives smoothly. I definitely agree to the full extent that the
internet
is the biggest invention of all time.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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