A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory establishment?

The industrial development of our country has reached a new level where many factories are constructed for production and distribution. Since the announcement has been made to build a large

factory

near our area, the local

community

is excited about the upcoming opportunities. Can that

factory

bring more business to us? In

this

essay, I will argue about the potential new job creation and prospecting businesses but

also

about the pollution and the traffic congestion on the roads. In the first place, the local

community

has good potential to work with the new factories from the building stage to the up-and-running stage; meanwhile, they should start exploring to find more details about the

factory

and its line of business. There are new line businesses in the local

community

,

such

as accommodation rental, transportation, food catering

and

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etc. Once the

factory

is finished, the company needs to hire more people,

therefore

, our local groups can start training and preparation to meet the necessary qualifications. Not only our

community

has a lot of young people who will be graduating in the upcoming years but

also

a decent amount of

factory

workers from another district. The bigger the

factory

is , the more people are needed

for running

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its business.

On the other hand

, our area is very quiet and healthy today, which is not the case after the

factory

is opened. Unless there's proper planning for traffic control, the roads will be congested with a lot of cars and trucks;

moreover

, our locals need to deal with new environmental

issues

as well as

air pollution

issues

because the

factory

could produce industrial dust

while

operating.

That is

uncertain whether the local authority can enforce the company with strict guidelines or not. Since those

issues

impact the well-being of our local residents, a potential dispute can happen between them. In conclusion, the new

factory

is going to bring great value for our local businesses and new jobs despite the potential

issues

. I think most of the local

community

will support the company

to build

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a new

factory

here as long as they present acceptable guidelines to resolve potential

issues

in the near future.