Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, . give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre . explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community . describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear Sir/Madam, My Name is Niranjan. I am writing

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letter on behalf of the

community

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to request not to close the Sports and Leisure centre.

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, My friends and I played many games in the Sports Centre, and our families use the Centre in their free time for a walk in the evening.

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, It is essential to have

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centres in every local

community

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as it allows everyone to spend some time for refreshments and allows meeting everyone in the

community

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. It improves competitiveness among the children in the tournaments conducted by the council at festival times every year. Nowadays, most are not coming out to play or spend some time with friends or relatives because of the high usage of mobile phones and browsing platforms through the internet. If these kinds of centres are not available in the

community

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, not possible for Children or Elders to meet at some point, which causes usage of a higher mobile percentage than earlier.

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, I want to conclude that certain things should look outside monetary terms. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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181 words

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leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
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