Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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anymore because

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availability of information online and the effectiveness of homeschooling is the same as learning at school. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with

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can provide

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so much more than just knowledge and homeschooling is only effective in certain cases. Not only knowledge

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schools

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give students a chance to socialize and shape their morals. Unlike online studying, students get to meet people and interact with them face to face, which helps them get accustomed to

communicate

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with other people later in life. And as children interact with other human beings, they shape their own ideas of what’s right and what’s wrong, with teachers by their side

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guide

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them to the correct path and way of thinking.

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homeschooling has been proven to be effective, even more than traditional schooling in some aspects, they only grant benefits to learners with self-control and a sense of discipline. Only in that way can they utilize online learning and use it to the fullest.

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who aren’t hardworking and well-disciplined,

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is a whole different story. They will neglect

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and turn to digital entertainment

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, which gradually

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their knowledge. In conclusion, though homeschooling has

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considerable

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popularity

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popularity

thesedays

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these days

,

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will still remain relevant.