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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#schools #children #information #internet #study #home
It is thought that children don’t need to go to
schools
 anymore because
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 availability of information online and the effectiveness of homeschooling is the same as learning at school. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with
this
 as
schools
 can provide
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 so much more than just knowledge and homeschooling is only effective in certain cases. Not only knowledge
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schools
 can
also
 give students a chance to socialize and shape their morals. Unlike online studying, students get to meet people and interact with them face to face, which helps them get accustomed to
communicate
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 with other people later in life. And as children interact with other human beings, they shape their own ideas of what’s right and what’s wrong, with teachers by their side
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guide
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 them to the correct path and way of thinking.
Although
 homeschooling has been proven to be effective, even more than traditional schooling in some aspects, they only grant benefits to learners with self-control and a sense of discipline. Only in that way can they utilize online learning and use it to the fullest.
On the other hand
,
learners
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 who aren’t hardworking and well-disciplined,
this
 is a whole different story. They will neglect
studying
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 and turn to digital entertainment
instead
, which gradually
decrease
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 their knowledge. In conclusion, though homeschooling has
gain
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 considerable
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popularity
popular
popularing
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popularity
thesedays
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these days
,
schools
 will still remain relevant.
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