“In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

There is one kind of promotion that with the technology development, we should give up eating

animals

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or using them for experiments.

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I do agree with the importance of animal protection, it is

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unnecessary

unnecesary

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unnecessary

to totally drop animal use for health purposes. It is crucial to protect animal diversity and animal living rights as possible.

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, it is ideal to forbid slaughtering

animals

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for commercial profit.

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, wearing furs and feathers is a fashionable dressing style in some cold areas. It arouses many illegal

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issues and even causes some kind of

animals

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to distinction because their feather values

a

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large amount of money.

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that, there is a costume of eating those kinds of less common wild

animals

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in some remote areas due to their different tastes from commonly reared

animals

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. These kinds of greedy and selfish pursuits should be banned worldwide nowadays. From another aspect,

animals

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could be helpful for human health and

medicine

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researches

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.

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, some kinds of animal products are not harmful

for

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animals

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themselves,

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as milk and

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apply

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variations of dairy, which can provide nutrients which are good for human beings.

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, it is a traditional way to rear several species for their meat for

thousands

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years.

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, using

animals

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, like white rats or beagle dogs, for drug testing is an

adoptable

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adaptable

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way to ensure the safety of new drugs. In conclusion, it is questionable to completely give up animal

production

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products

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in our times.

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, we should ban those actions against animal protection regulations and focus on how to treat edible

animals

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properly.