According to some, all citizens should be given some wages from the government to live despite not being hired. I disagree with
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of all, most of the government’s income comes from tax, Linking Words
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, each citizen should be employed and pushed into the annual tax system. With getting enough revenue, the authority can comprehensively take care of its people. What should be controlled Linking Words
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of providing them with money is to support them to have professional opportunities. Linking Words
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, reducing their cost of living, Linking Words
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as improving the quality of transportation and controlling the commuting fare, is considered one of the necessary ways to solve the problem because taking public transportation rather than a private car is not only helping them to save their daily cost but Linking Words
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enhancing the economy.
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, affordable basic healthcare for everyone is Linking Words
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an unforgettable point managed by the government. Unhealthy ones may cause a huge expense problem. Linking Words
For example
, In America, many people suffer severely from obesity, leading to health education to improve Americans’ health and well-being. Linking Words
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, the most important of the country's developmental roots Linking Words
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, it brings the unemployed a great number of chances of having a permanent job, which can lead them to a better life.
To conclude, teaching people to catch fish rather than giving them is the sustainable development of the country.Linking Words