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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books beacause they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In
this
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 modern era, anything in
this
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 world had been spinning faster than in the past including materials
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 as
books
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 and printed newspapers. Some people believe that they can read everything on the internet without paying, while some individuals believe that have to preserve it.
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 essay will be examined both agree and disagree in detail.
Initially
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, technology had been changing over the past decades. These days, it has electronic
books
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 known as e-
books
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 on technological materials
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 as
iPad
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.
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, many people will be able to read
books
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 and search for anything they want through the internet on the
iPad
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 because it is easier than opening
books
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 or going to the library.
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, teenagers use
iPad
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 or tablets for lectures
instead
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 of writing lectures on paper because it is convenient to carry and free as well as able to read many
books
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 on one item as university students used
iPad
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 for wrote something in lecture classes replacing printed sheets and bought
books
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 since they can keep the money to spend other things.
On the other hand
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, some individuals believe that they should preserve purchasing printed newspapers and
books
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 since it can improve their skills of reading
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 as reading
books
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 from original materials made them concentrate more than reading on
iPad
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.
Additionally
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, reading a book enables
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the reduction of Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder or ADHD's chance in juveniles.
For example
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, some friends were ADHD and they cannot read
books
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 for more than five sentences because inside of their bodies stimulated them to do other things, they cannot focus on. In conclusion, it can be seen that reading
books
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 from e-
books
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 that able to read many
books
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 on one material and make it easier than carrying many
books
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.
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, some people believe that it should be preserved to improve their skills and reduced the chance of ADHD in teenagers.
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