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Many students choose to complete at least some of their university in a foreign country.What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

The choice to complete some part of their university in different countries has been the model of admission in the
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 years, but, will be the best way?
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 question is about if the student is ready for
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 new moment. Some classmates can feel that will go to have experience in another language.
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, they have expectations to improve their CV.
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, the university sees a purpose in a foreign
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. One
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 advantage of studying in another
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 is learning a language differently and can know new cultures, people create a learned distinto known,
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, they have contact with other people from distinct places. in
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 place, the student increments an experience in their CV and
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 easily joins in the jobs and is great for the labour market. But, exist some disadvantages how to studying in language different, from the adaptation to other countries with a culture different. The cost is expensive, or the charge of the coin. The fact is before their place and friends. In conclusion,
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, when students feel to choose to complete their university in a foreign nation need to understand that exist advantages and disadvantages in the
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 period of their life. They need to know the choice will be important for your development, but, some advantages and disadvantages will be both. But, I believe that the same advantages shown to the student in a foreign
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 are very important for their knowledge and the labour market,
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 experience choice of the CV of the students and easily join the best jobs in their
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • higher quality education
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • language skills
  • personal growth
  • independence
  • job prospects
  • international networks
  • financial considerations
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