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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for spots or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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 hunt shows are very popular in India. Some people have quite unique talents which are difficult to imagine.
For example
, a person can create a shadow of different faces of the freedom fighters of India by just using his
two
 hands. It is a debatable topic whether
such
 talents are learned or it is
God gifted
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. Few people are born with a
talent
.
For instance
, a
two
 years old child can play multiple drums parallel like a professional musician. I am confident that a child cannot learn
such
 skills at the age of
two
. Sometimes you inherit
such
 skills from your ancestors.
For instance
, it is not surprising if a great singer's son can
also
 sing very well.
On the other hand
, we have a considerable amount of people who are different from their
family
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.
For example
, a golf world champion belongs to
the
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 wrestler’s family. A champion confirmed that his father wanted him to be different
than
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 his family. With rigorous training he became
would
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 champion at the age of nine. If
talent
 is acquired only by birth
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 a coaching concept would not have been accepted so widely. It is said that China won 15 medals in one of the Olympic Games. After that, the government started a training program nationwide where kids are being trained in different sports. In
two
 decades China won 15 medals and became number one in
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game
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. I truly believe that
talent
 can be learned
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 passion and dedication. We would not have
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 some of the greatest talents in India like Lata Mangeshkar and Sachin Tendulkar if they stopped trying after their initial failures. If
talent
 is acquired by birth
then
 Mr Amitabh Bachchan would have stopped
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acting after continuous nice flop films
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 of his career, thinking he does not have any inherent acting skill
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