Write about the following topic. Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary world, the education industry is changing rapidly and more and more intelligent

children

are increasing.

Accordingly

half of the people propose that offspring who are having academic abilities should be separated, while the other opponents think that each and every child should get an equal education together. My opinion about the aforementioned statements will discuss later in the essay while both of the discussions are elucidated with examples. We live in a world where people divide scion according to their talents,

this

is the worst-case scenario that can happen to

children

, because of

this

division in school, youngsters face numerous consequences

such

as mental illness and depression, which is occurring when they are isolated with

other heir

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another heir

other heirs

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.

Moreover

, it is a better option to divide the

children

as the job markets are rising and society wants talented offspring, but what will happen to the weak

children

? Aren’t they able to improve their

skills

? As an example, if a weak child wants to develop their

skills

in a class, he or she needs to be in a classroom where other talented kids are learning,

hence

that weak child will get motivation.

On the other hand

, every school should educate

children

to one standard, especially the

children

should not be divided into different classes, as they need to show their talents to each other and from that they will increase their knowledge and

skills

. Even though there is a positive

factors

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factor

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in combining talented and other kids, there is a negative factor as well, where teachers cannot educate the

children

because they are having different standards of talent. To sum up, in my ,opinion

children

should be equally treated at schools, improving their

skills

and abilities is based according to the teaching

skills

and the capacities

children

have to gain knowledge.