Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the
parents
' main concerns is their children
's education
. However
, I consider that over the years, parents
have been more absenced
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absence
absences
of
their Change preposition
by
kids
' education
. I have these feelings for two reasons that I will explain in detail below.
The first
point I would like to make is that the
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apply
woman
role has changed. It has been a shift from Change noun form
woman's
stay at home
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stay-at-home
mothers
to working mothers
. Before, women had more time
to dedicate to their children
's education
. Nowadays, mothers
get home tired and do not have much time
to be involve
in their Change the verb form
be involved
kids
' school. For instance
, in my case, when I was a kid, my mother worked full time
. She used to spent
too much Wrong verb form
spend
time
on
her job and get home late. Because of her lack of free Change preposition
at
time
, she didn't pay too much interesting
Replace the word
interest
in
my school grades. Change preposition
on
On the other hand
, my grandomther
didn't work any Correct your spelling
grandmother
time
of her life. So, she used to be involve
in her Change the verb form
be involved
children
's education
by going to talk to the teachers, following the activities and asking her
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about her
kids
' grades.
The second
thought I would like to point out is that parents
give more hours to their own education
over the years. This
happens because the world is getting more Correct your spelling
competitive
competive
. Correct your spelling
competitive
Nowdays
, it is not enough Correct the word
Nowadays
having
lots of Change the verb form
to have
working
experience. To get a promotion, part of the companies' Replace the word
work
Correct your spelling
requirements
requeriments
is to be updated. Correct your spelling
requirements
For example
, my uncle wanted to earn more money to give to his family. So, he worked harder for a promotion. However
, he needed to have a post-graduate degree to achieve a promotion. He studied a
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for a
master
degree for two Change noun form
master's
year
. During Change to a plural noun
years
this
time
, he was not present in his children
's lives.
In conclusion, I think parents
are not as involve
as before in their Change the form of the verb
involved
children
's education
. As I mentioned before, nowadays, mothers
work full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
hours and don't have much time
to care of
their Change preposition
for
kids'
Change noun form
kids
school
. Change preposition
at school
Also
, parents
are focusing on their own educational growth.Submitted by keylas999 on
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