Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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parents

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' main concerns is their

children

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's

education

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.

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, I consider that over the years,

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have been more

absenced

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absence

absences

of

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their

kids

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'

education

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. I have these feelings for two reasons that I will explain in detail below. The

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point I would like to make is that

the

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woman

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role has changed. It has been a shift from

stay at home

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mothers

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to working

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. Before, women had more

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to dedicate to their

children

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's

education

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. Nowadays,

mothers

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get home tired and do not have much

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to

be involve

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in their

kids

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' school.

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, in my case, when I was a kid, my mother worked full

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. She used to

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too much

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on

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at

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her job and get home late. Because of her lack of free

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, she didn't pay too much

interesting

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in

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my school grades.

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, my

grandomther

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grandmother

didn't work any

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of her life. So, she used to

be involve

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in her

children

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's

education

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by going to talk to the teachers, following the activities and asking

her

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about her

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kids

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' grades. The

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thought I would like to point out is that

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give more hours to their own

education

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over the years.

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happens because the world is getting more

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competitive

competive

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competitive

.

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, it is not enough

having

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lots of

working

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experience. To get a promotion, part of the companies'

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requirements

requeriments

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requirements

is to be updated.

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, my uncle wanted to earn more money to give to his family. So, he worked harder for a promotion.

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, he needed to have a post-graduate degree to achieve a promotion. He studied

a

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master

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degree for two

year

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. During

this

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time

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, he was not present in his

children

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's lives. In conclusion, I think

parents

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are not as

involve

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as before in their

children

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's

education

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. As I mentioned before, nowadays,

mothers

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work

full

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full-time

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time

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hours and don't have much

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to care

of

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for

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their

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kids'

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kids

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school

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at school

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.

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,

parents

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are focusing on their own educational growth.