Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

One of the
parents
' main concerns is their
children
's
education
.
However
, I consider that over the years,
parents
have been more
absenced
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absence
absences
of
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by
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their
kids
'
education
. I have these feelings for two reasons that I will explain in detail below. The
first
point I would like to make is that
the
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woman
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woman's
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role has changed. It has been a shift from
stay at home
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stay-at-home
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mothers
to working
mothers
. Before, women had more
time
to dedicate to their
children
's
education
. Nowadays,
mothers
get home tired and do not have much
time
to
be involve
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be involved
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in their
kids
' school.
For instance
, in my case, when I was a kid, my mother worked full
time
. She used to
spent
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too much
time
on
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at
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her job and get home late. Because of her lack of free
time
, she didn't pay too much
interesting
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interest
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in
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on
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my school grades.
On the other hand
, my
grandomther
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grandmother
didn't work any
time
of her life. So, she used to
be involve
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in her
children
's
education
by going to talk to the teachers, following the activities and asking
her
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about her
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kids
' grades. The
second
thought I would like to point out is that
parents
give more hours to their own
education
over the years.
This
happens because the world is getting more
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competitive
competive
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competitive
.
Nowdays
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, it is not enough
having
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to have
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lots of
working
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work
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experience. To get a promotion, part of the companies'
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requirements
requeriments
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requirements
is to be updated.
For example
, my uncle wanted to earn more money to give to his family. So, he worked harder for a promotion.
However
, he needed to have a post-graduate degree to achieve a promotion. He studied
a
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for a
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master
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master's
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degree for two
year
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years
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. During
this
time
, he was not present in his
children
's lives. In conclusion, I think
parents
are not as
involve
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involved
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as before in their
children
's
education
. As I mentioned before, nowadays,
mothers
work
full
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full-time
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time
hours and don't have much
time
to care
of
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for
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their
kids'
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kids
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school
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at school
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.
Also
,
parents
are focusing on their own educational growth.
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