Many museums charge for admissions while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum overweight the disadvantages?

A majority of museums collect an amount of entrance.

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, some implement a zero entrance fee policy to draw more attendance from the public. From my perspective, there are both benefits and drawbacks.

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these two aspects will clearly contribute to the revelation of my agreement with the previous one.

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imposing admission fees will financially benefit a range of organizations resulting in more prolonged operation of the facilities.

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, many museums are under governmental administration. Like other entities, government body needs a budget to keep the museums well-maintained and sustainable for public visits.

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, collecting money from visitors can definitely help resolve

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issue and keep the entity running for an extended period.

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, it is considered a source of income contributed to our country through the tax associated with the tickets the visitors pay.

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, it may discourage people

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if the entrance fee is irrationally costly, which may lead to public ignorance of the national history in junction with the possible bankruptcy of the entity. To illustrate, people tend to reject going to historical sites, the admission

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of which are pricey as they have better and cheaper choices.

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, the situation in which the

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sees no income yielded yet payment of staff salary and maintenance costs still persist will undoubtedly push the

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on the verge of shutdown.

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, people are short of choices to visit a place where they can learn massive knowledge of their ancestors' lives, solidarities and

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economic development in the past. In short, I believe that an affordable reasonable

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charge, which should be imposed in an attempt to attract more visitors to the site is incentivised. In

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way, not only does the

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itself financially benefit but citizens reserve more chances to access invaluable historical references which deliver precious lessons about the economy, solidarity, and national cultures.