Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?

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Violence

crimes

are rapidly increasing in many developed countries due to poor

law

enforcement

and misusage of human rights. The security of our lives is the most important factor in a society where capital

punishment

is necessary to reduce crime rates. Does every criminal deserve capital

punishment

? In

this

essay, I will examine the facts from both points of view and

then

explain why I believe capital

punishment

is necessary. There are many repeat

criminals

in many societies because the

punishment

is not that serious for the

crimes

they committed. In

such

cases,

law

enforcement

does not apply capital

punishment

strongly, whereas, maintaining decent human rights,

such

as considerations of the criminal's age, their family matters and their living conditions. Many people believe that all humans equally deserved a

second

chance which gives less security in return. Without capital

punishment

, the crime rates did not decrease at all

instead

crimes

occurred since some

criminals

knew how to abuse the system for their own benefit.

On the other hand

, capital

punishment

is too strong that young

criminals

didn't get the chance to correct themselves, not even once. Since there are little few known differences between repeat

criminals

and

first

-timers for

law

enforcement

, they usually judge both of them equally.

Therefore

, many people learned the lessons from the other punishments and not dared to commit them again for any reason,

for instance

, the distribution of drugs is capital

punishment

law

no matter how young the criminal is or how small the amount of drugs is. With capital

punishment

, the community become more secure as well as more peaceful, which assures quality lives for many people. Of cause the stronger the

law

is enforced, the few

crimes

happened in society. In conclusion, I believe that the safety of our lives is a top priority, so capital

punishment

is essential to reduce crime rates, especially in serious cases.

Additionally

law

enforcement

should consider giving the chances for

first

-timers whether they deserve the chance for correction or not.

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