Some people believe that car-free days are affective ways to reduce air population. However, others ways that are more effective. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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Today more and more feel that designed car-free
days
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are successful ways to bring
air
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population
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.
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advocates of
this
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view argue that
cars
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should be few to reduce
air
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population
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. Others,
however
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, disagree and
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believe
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that there are alternative ways that are more and more effective. On the one hand those in favour of keeping
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air
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population
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, because most people feel better in
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the fresh
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air
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.
This
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have
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valid reasons to be concerned about
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air
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the air
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population
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.
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, because many countries have tremendous factories and different automobiles, the
air
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population
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is not always good. But many countrysides
than
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have
cleaner
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a cleaner
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air
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population
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than cities. The reason for
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there
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aren't many factories and
cars
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. That's why the
air
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here is clean.
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there don't industry extra gases and hazardous
substance
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and everything is natural. In my view
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counties decrease
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pollutants
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and the laws existing
in
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in-country
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country
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need to be aimed at car-free
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and improving
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the
air
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population
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.
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, there are many people who would argue that the car-free
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days
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day's
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damage not only
air
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-
pupulation
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population
,
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but relieve our lives.
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, others disagree and believe that don't need to
car free
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car-free
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days
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. Indeed we need to somewhere urgent situation to
cars
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.
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, when people want to go
to
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abroad or hospital long distances they need
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cars
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. But now different types need to
cars
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are producing
and
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more gas which is harmful to health and
air
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. In
conclude
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,
although
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the hazardous for
air
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population
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besides
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our health. There is
need
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a need
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for the
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car-free
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car free
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car-free
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days
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to be regulated by introducing strict politics. In my
opinion
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both sides are correct.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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