many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. what do you think are the causes of this? what effects will this have on society
It is certainly true that a number of
criminals
continue to do criminal activities immediately after they are freed from jail
. There are various factors behind this
and the community will have a significant impact owing to this
.
To begin
with, family background and poverty play major roles to inspire a plethora of criminals
to illegal work after leaving prison. The prisoners when they left from jail
, will not have any money. Moreover
,they will be jobless and no company will accept them for employment due to their past experience. As a result
and owing to his family's pressure for survival, many prisoners will try to find short cut in order to get money and subsequently
they start committing crimes repeatedly. For example
, As per research conducted by the criminal justice of India, more than 70% of criminals
who left jail
, returned back again within 1 month.
There are various effects on our society
due to this
. Firstly
, our community will never trust criminals
once they left from jail
. As a result
, society
will never give chance to such
types of persons in future for any work. Secondly
, there will be an always threat to people, assets and the environment for their safety, and security. Thirdly
, our society
will not have acceptance for criminal family members and therefore
, there will be a significant impact on our harmony and brotherhood. For example
, as per research conducted by the High Court of India, more than 70% of people accepted that criminals
are a threat to society
.
To conclude, It is evident from the above discussion that there are some reasons which led criminals
to attempt crime after leaving prison and this
has a severe impact on society
considering harmony and safety of common people.Submitted by mohan on
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