ome people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that is has had a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Since international

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is more accessible, some parts of society believe

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brings back a lot of benefits for both the community and the economy.

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, others think that it has numerous negative impacts. From my standpoint, I agree with the former statement, and I will elaborate on both views and my opinion in the following essay. Without a doubt, the convenience of

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travel

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has changed the way

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transport, especially international

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and foremost, it isn't easy to imagine

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not using planes to

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as it is a great chance not to waste our own time on the road and enjoy flying in the sky for a short time.

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used to

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to another country by

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by car, which took them long hours riding and getting through the boundary between the two countries.

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people

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have taken advantage of the

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and decided to

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as it is cost cheaper and faster.

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, since low-cost

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allow

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easily, from

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economic perspective, the development of the aviation industry can be extremely positive as economic growth can be improved.

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, the development of economic

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has several negative impacts. Due to the increasing number of cheap

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, pollution from

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also

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increases rapidly.

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, the environment is badly affected, and it

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affects local citizens’ lives.

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, according to a recent survey, which was made by the local authority in Vietnam, it is said that the number of carbon footprints that an

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releases

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nearly 1000 kilograms of carbon dioxide per passenger.

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airplanes

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also

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consume numerous amounts of fossil fuels. To conclude,

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economic

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travel

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has some drawbacks, it still has a significant contribution to our lives and the economy as well as the government can use the profit to recover the environment.

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Topic Vocabulary:

globalization
sustainable travel
carbon footprint
mass tourism
cultural exchange
economic boost
budget airlines
ecological repercussions
noise pollution
cultural commodification
democratization of travel
heritage conservation
climate change
tourist influx
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