some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

There are
people
who believe that we are living in the best era of history. I definitely agree with
this
notion and would have chosen
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in the same historical period if I had the chance to make a
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decision about it.
First
of all , the advancement of technology provided lots of opportunities for
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contemporary
people
for having easier and more enjoyable
lives
. Nowadays, technologists are pushing back the frontiers
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of knowledge
and are skilled in harnessintechnologyogy to provide facilities thmakeke doing things much easier.
For example
, we
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use cutting
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and
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washing machines
in our everyday life, and we can not imagine our
lives
without them anymore,AlsoAlso we can travel around the world in the shortest time at
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cost or get in touch with our loved ones who live miles away on the phone.
Moreover
, scientists promoted
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healthcare care
services which can save our
lives
when we are in need. Clearly, the past generations lacked the advancement of medical treatments.
On the other hand
, I would like to live in ancient times when the world looked completely different .
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1000 years ago. I suppose it canfascinatingating to find out how different was
people
's
lives
in the past.
Moreover
, my country was a powerful
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empire empire
in the past that many praised it. So it can be rewarding to live in
such
a majestic empire. My country was a safe and peaceful country with kind and loving
people
. In conclusion, the recent era which we are living in is one of the best parts of history to live in, as science and
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our
lives
and we could find treatments for many diseases and
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life expectancy increased significantly.
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  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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