some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?
There are
people
who believe that we are living in the best era of history. I definitely agree with this
notion and would have chosen live
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First
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contemporary
people
for having easier and more enjoyable lives
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, scientists promoted healthcarecare
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lives
when we are in need. Clearly, the past generations lacked the advancement of medical treatments.
On the other hand
, I would like to live in ancient times when the world looked completely different . For example
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.
In conclusion, the recent era which we are living in is one of the best parts of history to live in, as science and technology facilitated
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