Too much money is spent on looking after and repairing old buildings. Some people think we should knock old buildings down and build new modern ones. To what extent do you or disagree?

Some

people

think the long-term cost of protection and fixing old

buildings

is so high that we should use new

buildings

to replace them.

However

, in my opinion, new

buildings

indeed provide

more

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effective way to satisfy housing but old

buildings

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reservation is

also

necessary for

individual

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and society. Old

buildings

are

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critical

critial

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to

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traditional

tradtional

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traditional

and national culture, from which everyone

have

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develop

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a sense of self-identity and

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up confidence that

make

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them feel strong to face kinds of obstacles. Old

buildings

are carriers that undertake traditional culture and history. So

people

can understand the past and how it tortuously developed in the long history through them.

Then

people

can understand who they are and will be part of the history

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their nation. As they build up the connection to the past, they will develop a sense of belonging, which becomes

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part of their national identity. If everyone has

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national identity and

principle

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, we will achieve social

cohension

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cohesion

.

However

, it would not be

reasonableto

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reasonable to

ask

people

to protect old

buildings

in a city or town where they can not find enough houses to live in. Reservation of cultural heritage is

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undoubtedly

undoubtely

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undoubtedly

significant, but satisfying

citizens

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basic living standards

such

as housing, hospital, and school should is always

top

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concern for all

people

.

For example

, in China, with old

buildings

in cities and towns being demolished, more and more skyscrapers were constructed to give a facility to

accomdation

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accommodation

for working, living, and shopping 30 years ago. Overall, the extent of

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the old

buildings

should depend on the

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condition

conditon

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condition

of

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or

nation'

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housing situation. Conserving ancient

buildings

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undoubtedly

undoubtely

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undoubtedly

is a great

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choice

chioce

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choice

to provide an opportunity to strengthen citizens

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sense of national conviction as long as it can ensure the housing is sufficient.