You have just returned from a holiday. You are unhappy with the quality of the hotel you stayed in and want to complain to the travel agency that arranged the holiday. Write a letter to the manager of the travel agency. In your letter, say about the holiday and where you stayed mention why you are unhappy about the hotel where you stayed say what you would like the travel agency to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that the
hotel
where I stayed during the
last
journey was horrible. I am Ankit Patel and had a holiday in Ottawa where I stayed at the Palace
Hotel
which was arranged by your agency. I went to
this
place
last
week and checked in
this
hotel
after a long wait in the lobby area even after a reservation. After got entry inside the room, I found it unmanaged and even the curtain was broken in the washroom after so many requests, they changed it on next day morning.
However
, the staff members were not polite and had to request many times for any work and replied aggressively. Because of their behaviour and services, I was disappointed which affected my holiday. In
this
situation, I would like to suggest you share
this
feedback with the
hotel
manager and
also
suggest you choose another
hotel
for your stay. Your Faithfully, Ankit
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea. For example, you can separate the issues you faced at the hotel and the suggestions you have for the travel agency into different paragraphs.
complete response
Try to add more specific details about your experience to make your complaint more compelling. For example, mention specific issues such as cleanliness, noise levels, or other inconveniences you experienced.
suitable writing tone
The letter is polite and maintains a suitable writing tone throughout, which is important for formal letters of complaint.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are used correctly and contribute to the proper format of a formal letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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