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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

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Dear Ram,
Hi
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 How are you? ,Sorry it's been so long since I
last
 wrote to you. Some exciting news. I'll be living in your city coming two years for my higher studies. I've decided to study Advanced programming for a better career. As I searched for some good colleges that provide the best teaching in
this
 course, most of the findings are in your city. As you know, I'm working as an IT technician in Wipro for the past 2-years. During
this
 time I enjoyed my work and learned about many interesting careers I can choose with a degree in Advanced programming. I
also
 want to study abroad to experience different cultures,
also
 at the same time learn valuable life skills. To my surprise, there are at least 7 colleges in your city that accepts international students. I would like to ask you in choosing an appropriate college based on the amenities available for international students, and
also
 close to you so I don't feel homesick. Please let me know. Your friend, Srinath
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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