You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

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Dear Ram,

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How are you? ,Sorry it's been so long since I

last

wrote to you. Some exciting news. I'll be living in your city coming two years for my higher studies. I've decided to study Advanced programming for a better career. As I searched for some good colleges that provide the best teaching in

this

course, most of the findings are in your city. As you know, I'm working as an IT technician in Wipro for the past 2-years. During

this

time I enjoyed my work and learned about many interesting careers I can choose with a degree in Advanced programming. I

also

want to study abroad to experience different cultures,

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at the same time learn valuable life skills. To my surprise, there are at least 7 colleges in your city that accepts international students. I would like to ask you in choosing an appropriate college based on the amenities available for international students, and

also

close to you so I don't feel homesick. Please let me know. Your friend, Srinath

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8 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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