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In spite of the advances in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the cases? What can be done about this problem?

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It is widely believed that
people
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 all around the
world
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 still suffer from
hunger
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 despite advances in farming and agriculture. The problem of
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hunger
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 is caused by government policies and business holders and can result in a population decrease. The possible solutions to
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 problem will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Food
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 is one of the fundamental needs of a person. Population decrease is an issue which is rooted in many reasons one of which could be the lack of
food
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 supplies that leads
people
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 to
hunger
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. If
people
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 get hungry and pass away due to that, it will reduce the workforce and eventually, the result will be seen in the economy. Since not many children will make it to be old enough to work and make money and that will ruin a country’s economy. The
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 possible solution to
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 problem is that the governments should change their policies about imports and exports of
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products
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. It is common in many countries that the best
products
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 are being exported for financial gains while they import the very same product with less quality and sell it to
people
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 at higher prices. In
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 case, many
people
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 lose their lives because they can’t afford those
products
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 and provide them for their families. They should pay attention to their own
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, so they can buy high-quality
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 at reasonable prices. The
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 solution is very similar to the
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 one. Some business holders
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 as farm owners cling to their own profit and try to make money and they attach no importance to their own
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, but
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 perspective has to be changed since they should provide for their country. They should pay higher taxes for exporting so they have no choice but to sell fewer
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 to other countries and more
food
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 will be available for
people
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.
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, as mentioned in the previous paragraphs changing some regulations in importing and exporting agricultural
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 by governments and
people
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 who are active in business fields is a possible way to prevent
world
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hunger
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 and solve issues
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 as lack of
food
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 which might lead to
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 famine.
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